German homework! (help!)

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My Selene

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Hi there, I've got a homework in german for tomorrow (monday), but since I don't understand anything, I beg for your help!

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Was bedeutet Musik für mich?

Was höre ich am liebsten?

Wo höre ich am liebsten Musik?
(Warum? = weil.....+ Verb am Ende)

Was weiss ich über meine Lieblingsbands?

Eine 1/2 Seite A4 DIN von Hand geschrieben

Die Aufgabe entspricht (motsvarar) etwa 60 Minuten Arbeit
Am Montag abzugeben (att lämna in)

Music means a lot for me and I listen to it almost all the time. It is among the best things that exist, because it helps me a lot. Partly to take it easy and be calm, but also to get in up in rev when I need it.

I mostly listen to metal, beacause it contains many thing i desire. Fast guitars, heavy riffs and agression. The styles i mostly like is classic metal, power and black, but all styles has its carhm. My favorite bands differs from day to day, and right now are my favorite bands a black metal band called "shining", "Kreator" from Germany and finnish "Shamrain. But Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth and Opeth are bands that will be my all time favorites.

Here it goes. I wrote: Musik bedeutet viel für mich und ich liebe Musik hören. Musik ist unter.. But then I couldnt continue. Help me dudes or I may fail german :)
 

Thordis V.

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Music means a lot for me and I listen to it almost all the time. It is among the best things that exist, because it helps me a lot. Partly to take it easy and be calm, but also to get in up in rev when I need it.

I mostly listen to metal, beacause it contains many thing i desire. Fast guitars, heavy riffs and agression. The styles i mostly like is classic metal, power and black, but all styles has its carhm. My favorite bands differs from day to day, and right now are my favorite bands a black metal band called "shining", "Kreator" from Germany and finnish "Shamrain. But Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth and Opeth are bands that will be my all time favorites.

Musik bedeutet viel für mich und ich höre sie die meiste Zeit. Es ist eine der besten Sachen die existiert, weil sie mir sehr hilft. Einerseits um Dinge leicht zu nehmen und um mich zu beruhigen andererseits um mich in Stimmung zu bringen wenn ich es brauche.

Ich höre meist Heavy Metal weil es viele Dinge beeinhaltet, die ich mag. Schnelle Gitarren, harte Riffs und Agression. Die Genres die ich am meisten mag sind klassischer, Power und Black Metal, aber alle Genres haben ihren Charme. Meine lLieblingsband ändert sich von Tag zu Tag, derziet sind meine Lieblingsbands eine Black Metal Band namens 'Shining', 'Kreator' aus Deutschland and die finnische Band 'Shamrain'. Aber auch Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth und Opeth sind Bands zu meinen Bands gehören, die ich jederzeit gerne höre.



I give no guarantee on mistakes, espically grammatical ones because I speak Austrian German which might vary from the one in Germany.
 

Tomatentöter

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My Selene schrieb:
Hi there, I've got a homework in german for tomorrow (monday), but since I don't understand anything, I beg for your help!

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Was bedeutet Musik für mich?

Was höre ich am liebsten?

Wo höre ich am liebsten Musik?
(Warum? = weil.....+ Verb am Ende)

Was weiss ich über meine Lieblingsbands?

Eine 1/2 Seite A4 DIN von Hand geschrieben

Die Aufgabe entspricht (motsvarar) etwa 60 Minuten Arbeit
Am Montag abzugeben (att lämna in)

Music means a lot for me and I listen to it almost all the time. It is among the best things that exist, because it helps me a lot. Partly to take it easy and be calm, but also to get in up in rev when I need it.

I mostly listen to metal, beacause it contains many thing i desire. Fast guitars, heavy riffs and agression. The styles i mostly like is classic metal, power and black, but all styles has its carhm. My favorite bands differs from day to day, and right now are my favorite bands a black metal band called "shining", "Kreator" from Germany and finnish "Shamrain. But Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth and Opeth are bands that will be my all time favorites.

Here it goes. I wrote: Musik bedeutet viel für mich und ich liebe Musik hören. Musik ist unter.. But then I couldnt continue. Help me dudes or I may fail german :)
'to be among' is translated 'gehören zu' or 'zählen zu'
also: Musik gehört zu den besten Dingen die existieren, weil sie mir oft hilft. Teilweise um es gemütlich angehen zu lassen und ruhig zu sein, aber auch um in Schwung zu kommen wenn ich es brauche.

So far. I hope this helps you.
Well, I don't translate the whole text, but when I can help with some difficult things, I'll help you.
 

My Selene

W:O:A Metalhead
5 Feb. 2005
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I hate german! Nothing will suck into my brain. But that is my problem and not the language. Thanx for helping.
 

My Selene

W:O:A Metalhead
5 Feb. 2005
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At senior level i was to lazy to pic a language. Now upper secondary school, I have to choose 2! So I picked Spanish and German which i am now forced to have at the same time. And I don't understand a shit of both of them.

I can choose french instead of one of them, but that is even worse!
 

Lucretia

W:O:A Metalmaster
10 Okt. 2002
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Thordis V. schrieb:
I mostly listen to metal, beacause it contains many thing i desire. Fast guitars, heavy riffs and agression. The styles i mostly like is classic metal, power and black, but all styles has its carhm. My favorite bands differs from day to day, and right now are my favorite bands a black metal band called "shining", "Kreator" from Germany and finnish "Shamrain. But Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth and Opeth are bands that will be my all time favorites.

... Meine lLieblingsband ändert sich von Tag zu Tag, derziet sind meine Lieblingsbands eine Black Metal Band namens 'Shining', 'Kreator' aus Deutschland and die finnische Band 'Shamrain'. Aber auch Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth und Opeth sind Bands zu meinen Bands gehören, die ich jederzeit gerne höre.

that last sentence does sound pretty strange... and lemme correct a few typo errors, ok? ;)

I´d write
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Meine Lieblingsbands ändern sich von Tag zu Tag, momentan (or derzeit, but for sure not derziet ;) ) sind meine Lieblingsbands eine Black Metal Band namens 'Shining', 'Kreator' aus Deutschland and die finnische Band 'Shamrain'.
Aber Judas Priest, Mayhem, Icead Earth und Opeth sind die Bands, die immer zu meinen Lieblingsbands gehören werden. / or: ..., die ich immer zu meinen Lieblingsbands zählen werde.
 

Lucretia

W:O:A Metalmaster
10 Okt. 2002
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Thordis V. schrieb:
:rolleyes: surely no grammatic errors, just a circumscription - huge difference...


um, this sentence is grammatically correct!?

Aber auch Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth und Opeth sind Bands zu meinen Bands gehören, die ich jederzeit gerne höre.

maybe in Austria :D ;)
For me it doesn´t make much sense - I´d say you´ve at least forgotten a "die":

Aber auch Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth und Opeth sind Bands, die zu meinen Bands gehören, die ich jederzeit gerne höre.

hey, and please don´t get me wrong! I don´t want to offend you at all or anything, just wanted to prevent mistakes in that homework ;)
 

Lucretia

W:O:A Metalmaster
10 Okt. 2002
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Hamburg
My Selene schrieb:
You could start telling me what it mean

LOL :D
How long have you been learning German?

Wo höre ich am liebsten Musik? = Where do I like listening to music best? (um.. now I don´t know if this is a correct english sentence structure :D )

Was weiss ich über meine Lieblingsbands? = what do I know about my fave bands?
 

My Selene

W:O:A Metalhead
5 Feb. 2005
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Mistake? Who cares! I say: Better to write a paper with several mistakes than nothing at all.

Lucretia schrieb:
um, this sentence is grammatically correct!?



maybe in Austria :D ;)
For me it doesn´t make much sense - I´d say you´ve at least forgotten a "die":

Aber auch Judas Priest, Mayhem, Iced Earth und Opeth sind Bands, die zu meinen Bands gehören, die ich jederzeit gerne höre.

hey, and please don´t get me wrong! I don´t want to offend you at all or anything, just wanted to prevent mistakes in that homework ;)
 

Thordis V.

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25 Nov. 2001
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:o

I tried my best to help, but always the same... Austrian does excist although some won't get it... sometimes constructions used in Germany sound also strange to me, but do I care...? Variety I'd say, not true or false.

Certain things do never change, I should get it :p
 

Lucretia

W:O:A Metalmaster
10 Okt. 2002
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Hamburg
My Selene schrieb:
Mistake? Who cares! I say: Better to write a paper with several mistakes than nothing at all.

thats true :)
anyway sometimes the teachers won´t believe that you´ve done it at your own when there are no mistakes at all :D