Toen zijn bewakers hem zijn vrijheid aanboden vanwege de hoge rang van zijn vader, weigerde McCain.
but your translations are really good!
1 thing, this stuff about mcCain is all past tense
yea, couldn't really figure that out...
and I am not sure about the word longsome, coz I just do not know that word (longsome)
Omdat zijn medegevangen niet vrijkwamen, koos hij ervoor ook te blijven, nog vier jaar.
for a long time
for a long time
When his keepers offer him freedom, because of his father's high rank, refuses McCain it.