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Hall of Viking Songs
feel free to visit my new blog about norse mythology. thank you
Wow... that's... that's pretty bad...
..I mean...at least spell check it or write in your own tongue.
I don't mean to be cruel, but seriously...wow..
wasn't expecting anything different from a "person" like you...
why i'm still suprised... anyway...
well your opinion of me does not change the fact that your poetry is filled with spelling errors.
is that Dani Filth's little cousin
were these guys involved with vikings? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dani_people
Ok, I was a little harsh, but you know if you're going to publish your works online you gotta accept some "people" will say it's shit.
So here's some constructive critisism.
Spelling. Seriously, there simply should not be spelling errors. There's really no excuse. Get a dictionary or spell checker.
Grammar/Structure. Poetry is not just about describing things, it's also about the manipulation of language to create art. Your work lacks this, is it even poetry? it just sounds like Amon Amarth, only there's no kick ass riffs. Hence my suggestion to perhaps write in your mother tongue. Make it sound like song even when you read it.
Your blog. The colours are a bit harsh and white against blue doesn't come across as great for reading.
you've gone soft..
maybe its a cult?
wait a minute, you're absolutely right.
resurrect the REAL zombi
get me 500 ml of cheap whisky, stat!
3 years old of course!
tesco value beer is all i can afford
at 2.1% it's hardly worth it.